#1
This song is for all you American Idol and Saula fans. (Saula is when Simon and Paula are dating) Please read it all the way though, even though the first two lines aren't that great. Critizise and comment!!

Simon and Paula, Idol's couple-to-be
I'm not saying it's true, it sounds like the key
But one night they had a drink
And until 1 A.M. they could not think

(this is the chorus)

How could this happen?
Everything was going so well
When they slept together it was a magical spell
They were all drunk and just couldn't stop themselves
When she said this was never meant to be

Simon couldn't believe it, he was mad as hell
They didn't mean to do it, he loved Paula so well
Paula cried cuz their baby was on the way
And said this was never meant to be
(chorus here)
#5
okay, here goes..

Simon and Paula, Idol's couple-to-be <--- awkward first line, i'd rephrase
I'm not saying it's true, it sounds like the key <--- the key to what? this one's a forced rhyme, meaning you chose key just because it rhymes with "be" worry less about rhyming and more about making your point

But one night they had a drink
And until 1 A.M. they could not think <--- this adds nothing to the piece. literally.

(this is the chorus)

How could this happen?
Everything was going so well
When they slept together it was a magical spell
They were all drunk and just couldn't stop themselves
When she said this was never meant to be < --- by far the best part so far.. i'd take out "all " and "just" in the third line to make the flow better. this song is silly.

Simon couldn't believe it, he was mad as hell
They didn't mean to do it, he loved Paula so well <--- "Loved paula so well?" weird phrase, again, one of those forced rhymes..
Paula cried cuz their baby was on the way
And said this was never meant to be <--- haha, at least this one's a slant rhyme : )
(chorus here)


since i don't think you're taking this song seriously, i, uh, well... it's okay. Honestly, it doesn't make a lot of sense.. something about paula and simon sleeping together and making babies... well, okay then.
#6
Quote by ~Melody~
This song is for all you American Idol and Saula fans. (Saula is when Simon and Paula are dating) Please read it all the way though, even though the first two lines aren't that great. Critizise and comment!!

Simon and Paula, Idol's couple-to-be
I'm not saying it's true, it sounds like the key

instead it sounds like in key try that

But one night they had a drink
And until 1 A.M. they could not think

(this is the chorus)

How could this happen?
Everything was going so well
When they slept together it was a magical spell
They were all drunk and just couldn't stop themselves
When she said this was never meant to be

l3 & l4 are bit forced in lkast line try then she....



Simon couldn't believe it, he was mad as hell
They didn't mean to do it, he loved Paula so well
Paula cried cuz their baby was on the way
And said this was never meant to be

last line i didnt like it


(chorus here)


overall funny and tell me are you a fan of american idol or not . of the record
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