#1
Verse 1:

Apathetic vermin
No urge to make a difference
Livng dead decaying human
Crawling through a petty existance

One chance for redemption
Your inner darkness
Need for your revolution
You'll have my forgiveness

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or wish you were dead

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Bridge:

Hate me
Empower me
Loathe me
Strengthen me

Verse 2:

Assemble your brotherhood
Those who share your interest
Plot your attack you should
You live because it is me you detest

Your past life was worse than death
Out of the coffin your hate did for you
Rally your troops and strike me down
Your lust for my blood exists, it's true that...

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or wish you were dead

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Interlude:

I butchered your serenity
Denied the Sodomites matrimony
Chained the Negros to a life of slavery
Gave the Hebrews power and authority

Conquered and slaughtered the Indians
Stole the land from the Mexicans
Occupied and saved the Arabians
Hesitant to stop the Koreans

(Guitar Solo)

Breakdown;

Give me immortality
Make me your diety
I create tragedy
Live by hating me

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or wish you were dead

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Outro;

(Hate me) Your dark side gives me power!
(Empower me) Your dark side gives me power!
(Loathe me) Your dark side gives me power!
(Strengthen me) Your dark side gives me power!
#2
very very VERY dark, but I love it!

I'm not one for this style of music (seems to be a black metal piece in a way, or possibly a slight bit of death metal but i could be wrong), but it works. The chorus is my favorite part, I just feel it's kind of catchy. The outro I picture the crowd shouting the words Hate Me, Empower Me and such, just because it seems like a fun crowd chanter, I love it.

Good job!
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#4
wow. I really liked the lyrics. Some dark stuff, but thats what Im into so its cool. Overall Just great writing. Defenitely got a death metal sound to it.