#1
Take my hand,
and take me away.
Babe, I just can't,
do this today.
Too much to do,
too much for today.
I feel like I am,
wasting away,
standing here,
night and day,
waiting for you,
to take me away.
I love you
You know its true
You know I'd kill
Just to see you
Just to save you
Cuz just the thought
of losing you
its the hardest thing i've ever
had to do
So you can just take tonight and just
Throw it all away
Turn to a new page
Start things off the right way
What I mean to say is
C'mon babe, take it all away.
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crit please
the game
#2
Cool idea. I get the feeling that you were forcing the day, way, stay rhyme a bit though.