#1
Your glory days are over
not a part of high society
if only you were sober
you might see the irony

So So sober up
so you can see
what you've become
and where you left me

Finish it off
one final glass
you've had enough
gone is your past

you had so much potential
thought you could have reign
but your only influential
from your side of the pane

wake up from that substance trip
see what you've become
wake up and get a grip
and see where you went wrong

Inner demonst infest
the bottom of your glass
it still turns out
you cant hide from the past

you thought you had so much potential
thought you could have reign
the only way your influential
is us hiding from your shame

Can't you see
what you've become
a mindless figure
so deaf dumb

won't you wake up
up from this slumber
please get up
before you go under

That six feet of dirt
is it looking heavy yet?
i can tell your hurt
But your burdens are the heaviest


I've been trying
to dig you out for so long
but the deeper i dig
the more that starts to go wrong

I left you there that day
under the ground
you buried yourself
and left without a sound

you thought you had so much potential
thought you could have reign
but in the end
it turns out your insane
#2
^ You can get warned or banned for doing that... only constructive critisisim allowed.....leftybassdude, ignore him he's just saying that because he cant write poetry... your piece was good, i liked it.
#4
To the thread starter, you had a noob saying things here, I've deleted the post so just ignore everything in this thread. You might wanna repost it. Up to you.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.