#1
well...this is my first song...ive been playing guitar for about 7 months...umm...just please crit it...i dont really have any musical experience so anything helps...

you might want to kill out the vocal track because it might get annoying(please tell me if it does)...

well...anything helps really...and im expecting mostly negative comments so...just tell me what you think...and what i can make better...

thanks...
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Last edited by 8open at Feb 23, 2007,
#2
dude that was AWESOME..i really liked it.

but i think you should...

1) change the basses midi patch from electric guitar (clean) to Electric bass Finger OR Electric Bass (pick)

2) maybe improve the bass a little bit..what you got now is great but maybe every once and a while make it follow the melody.

3) ADD SOME STRINGS THAT WOULD MAKE IT SOUND AWESOME

haha overall i loved it...good chord progression way betta than what i could of done after 7 months...9/10

can u crit my latest song...called 'a feel good song' i just added so it shouldn't be hard to find thx
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#3
hey man thanks...i changed the bass sound...it sounds alot better...i was just trying to get like a bass with distortion sound cause thats how i planned on it being played...it was the only way i could think of doing it...it sounds alot better with the bass patch though...

i'll try and get around to critting your soing when i have time...thanks
#5
if u want a overdriven bass sound make the bass patch either Lead 1 (square) or Lead 2 (sawtooth) but to able to here them turn the bass up
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#6
That sounded REALLY good. I enjoyed that a lot. I think you should change the staccato lead guitar parts (bars 9-12) to palm mutes and it might sound better. Yeah, like people said though, a strings section would make this song sound incredibly beautiful. I'd give it a B too. c4c,https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=533432 . Thanks dude.