#1
Another one of my acoustic songs...


INTRO


VERSE 1:

Driving her home, thinkin bout what to say,
I never really wanted it to end this way.
I've got to think of some way to let her know,
she's not the girl I thought she was 3 months ago.


CHORUS

So Baby, please don't cry now,
We weren't meant to be together.
It wasn't meant to be forever, and
I can't seem to find, the perfect explaination why.
It has to end, tonight


VERSE 2:

As I drop her off, out in front of her place,
I see a lonely tear fall down her sweet face.
I know she'll make some guy really happy one day.
But that guy isn't me so there's no need to stay.


CHORUS

So Baby, please don't cry now,
We weren't meant to be together.
It wasn't meant to be forever, and
I can't seem to find, the perfect explaination why.
It has to end, tonight.
Tonight.
Tonight.

CHORDS SOLO

OUTRO

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this is not final so all crit is greatly appreciated.

when i recorded it earlier it was about 3 minutes long... which is short, but its the lenth of most of my songs.


Flying is simple, you just throw yourself at he ground and miss.

This world needs more Dallas Friday's!
#2
i think its really good...maybe try to make the chorus a little longer...but thats just my opionon...good luck on your song
#3
I love it. It is all around a very very good song. Well done. This is not a proper crit because i cant really see anything wrong with it. Absolutely great man.
Great message. I love how it tells a true story, all the music now-a-days is all about stuff that never has happened, or hasn't happened to the writer themselves. I absolutely loved it man.