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First song ever written, not lang ago, friends told me it is to long , so plz rate or give suggestions
Ahyea and bout the name, no idea how to call it, so I call it 'At the end'
so here it is

At the end

Intro
Inside of all this pain,
when everything has gone,
when you are sitting there all alone,
When you see a bright light,
but you’re frozen...

Then you see, what you heard was true 2x

Intro Chorus
But you wouldn’t listen,
to that little voice in you head,
who said so clearly;
world goes down

Verse 1
You saw the guns, you saw the war,
You saw the pain of those who starved.
You saw the world who was going down
Before you knew it was to late,
the world was covered with this hate.
You saw the world who was going down.

Chorus
But you wouldn’t listen,
to that little voice in you head,
who said so clearly;
world goes down

Verse 2
You saw the blood, you saw the tears,
You saw the wounds of those who feared,
You saw the world who was going down.
You tried so hard to carry on,
But you were sitting there alone.
You saw the world who was going down.

Chorus

Re-intro/break
Inside of all this pain,
when everything has gone,
when you are sitting there all alone

Then you see the dark night,
And you’re broken

Then you see, what you heard was true 4x

Verse thingy before last chorus
And then you see, when all was gone,
and you were sitting there alone,
That the world was going down

Chorus

and thats it
Last edited by D4CE at Feb 23, 2007,