#4
better than most covers you'd see on here, much better, yesterday is good as well, u should put some reverb or tight delay over the vocals, would fill it out beautifully, wow yesterday is great, just finished
#6
Not bad.

You didn't do the little transition part before the chorus, my fav part.

Also, try doing upstrokes as well during the verses, it sounds very stagnant.
#8
As you can tell from my sig and the quote under my avatar, I am a big fan of this song and of what it stands for. I think you did a great job with it. Your voice is a little like Lennon's. In the verses, I thought you could have cut the guitar strums in half and maybe it would've sounded a little better. I also think you need a pop filter for your mic. The P in people popped in each chorus. The mix was great. I don't know if you recorded everything at once or not but it sounded good. Overall great job. I will listen to your other stuff later.

Would you mind critting a collab between me and slash_no_1??
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#10
Very good!
also, the vocals were very good.
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