#1
My first song that I actually remember. It kinda goes to the beat of the Rolling Stone's, Back of My Hand. It's a Blues song so there is no chorus.

1st verse:

Ya here them commin'
Round the corner
The drums a'drummin
The sound's a'numbin

2nd Verse:

They march in masses
Through the passes
To the holy lands of Detroit or so

Solo

3rd verse:

They sing their songs
And party on
To try and forget their pasts

4th verse:

The sky's boilin'
Yet they're still enjoyin'
The pleasures and bountys of long ago

Working on the rest.
My obligatory gear list

Guitars
Schecter C-1 Classic
Gibson SG Special
1987 Fender Strat
Epiphone PR-150

Amp and Effects
Peavey Valveking 112
Boss DD-6
Crybaby Wah-wah
Ibanez TS-9DX
Banshee 2 Talkbox


Crit plz! Wh ore of Gommorah
#2
I've seen a lot of shit come out of this thread page. But this was actually pretty good. Very simple, but sometimes simple is the best way to go.
#3
Thanks I was expecting the first comment be bad.
My obligatory gear list

Guitars
Schecter C-1 Classic
Gibson SG Special
1987 Fender Strat
Epiphone PR-150

Amp and Effects
Peavey Valveking 112
Boss DD-6
Crybaby Wah-wah
Ibanez TS-9DX
Banshee 2 Talkbox


Crit plz! Wh ore of Gommorah