#2
well i have to compliment ur work, really teeny boppy however what with the girl is mine talk, i think u chose the worng title in spite of that but very catchy and... happy,
sry i have no work on heer for u to crit
#3
Thanks for the crit dude.

I was shaky on the title, so I changed it to something that applies more to my relationship.
#6
Awesome again. I think "I Can't Believe" would be a good title for this, because its from the chorus but provides some contrast, as the title sounds like it would be a downer but the song is actually cheery. I listened on headphones and it seemed like the vocal volume was a little up and down all over the place, like some parts were too loud and some parts were too quiet. Maybe go back and check the levels?
#7
This is pretty cool because it's really teen boppy, but it has some heavy instrumentation, which is cool. I love the chorus. Good job. I'm pretty sure you've critted mine already, but here's a link anyway https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091. I liked your movie and your other songs, too, as I've told you before. I want to make a movie like yours. Keep it up.
#8
thanks for the crit. its good.

i agree with the others, its very pop-rock. the vocals are excellent.
the guitaring is simple, but well done, with the stops and starts, you've got a typical diistortion sound for your style, so it works well. The drums: again the same sort of thing, competent but nothing awe-enspiring.

its good so keep it up!