#1
'Pillow Talk In Tongues.'

We're all talking about the dream like the dream's just died.
We've been hating this scene cos the scene's stale inside.
Lips make hips make love makes money.
Words make pain make hate makes money too.

Being green whilst being blue, isn't especially good for you.
Loving hate whilst hating love, isn't doing you no good either.

Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Because this world doesn't get what it means.
Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Tired boys in vans aren't doing this for you.

I've been moping like the day your heart got fired.
I can't help but feel sorry for myself.
'Bergs sink ships goes down like you.
Good men go down too, but I'm not.

Being seen whilst out with me, isn't that bad for you.
I'm no virus nor a cure, but I'm just a little pure.

Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Because this world doesn't get what it means.
Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Tired boys in vans aren't doing this for you.
(Being green, whilst being blue.)
#2
Quote by bwilde
'Pillow Talk In Tongues.'

We're all talking about the dream like the dream's just died.
We've been hating this scene cos the scene's stale inside.
Lips make hips make love makes money.
Words make pain make hate makes money too.

l1 & l2 are ok but i cant understand l3 ,l4 may be if you can punctuate it better i will be able to find some meaning in it


Being green whilst being blue, isn't especially good for you.
Loving hate whilst hating love, isn't doing you no good either.

last line hampers the flow


Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Because this world doesn't get what it means.
Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Tired boys in vans aren't doing this for you.


last line 's a bit disjointed


I've been moping like the day your heart got fired.
I can't help but feel sorry for myself.
'Bergs sink ships goes down like you.
Good men go down too, but I'm not.

"but i'm not " seems forced

Being seen whilst out with me, isn't that bad for you.
I'm no virus nor a cure, but I'm just a little pure.

Above 2 lines are good


Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Because this world doesn't get what it means.
Just give up on hope, give up on your dreams.
Tired boys in vans aren't doing this for you.
(Being green, whilst being blue.)



well thats it not that gr8 . i 'm srry
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