#1
Hello all, I haven't been here in a year due to personal issues, anyways. Here's a song I threw together using my alvarez acoustic/electric, garageband, My Imac G4's internal Mic, and an M-audio MIDI controller keyboard in about 8 hours or so.

www.myspace.com/exoneration

I would like feedback and/or advice
#2
i look like u lol umm the part neer the start where it keeps going up in pitch should mabey stop a bit earlier that it did other than that its good
Guitars:
Ibanez IC300
Fender American Strat w/RioGrande texas specials

Amps:
Fender FM212R
a now broken tube amp

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#4
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A nice range you have there.

It sounded good, a bit on the boring side though.

Yeah I stuck with something simple, because I was really just testing the recording process and effects and other settings.
#5
i wrote a song just like a year ago....that bum-bum-bum......bum-bum-bum......then you start the chords, yeah it was called Essence.......yours was pretty good...
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#6
It is cool. I like the piano part, too. You should have more of that. This song would sound great with vocals. I love your percussion playing, too. You should make a song with all that. Good job. Keep it up. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091