#1
With backing track.

I tried singing so the cover wouldnt be boring, i tried to rock out as best as i could and problaby failed, but im a guitar player not a singer

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#3
man that was actually pretty good!

your voice suited the song perfectly!
vocals were much too quiet though.
you had sum problems with the louder parts... but that wasnt too bad.

liked it!

where do you get your backing tracks from?
#4
Wow, great job man......I thought your voice was awesome in the verses. Just a little strained on the chorus, but overall, much better than I could do, lol. Great guitar playing, you kept up the rhthym very well, timing was perfect. The mix had the vocals just a little too quiet. Sounded like maybe you were too far away from the mic when you sang. Overall awesome job. 9/10. Keep posting covers on here dude.

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#5
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man that was actually pretty good!

your voice suited the song perfectly!
vocals were much too quiet though.
you had sum problems with the louder parts... but that wasnt too bad.

liked it!

where do you get your backing tracks from?



Just go to http://www.guitarbt.com

they have millions of backtracks.

Yeah I did the louder parts in one try, so maybe ill try to do it again sometime today and try to hit those, but grohl can quite a badass. To be honest, i think the pre chorus and chorus sounds like absolute sh*t.

edit, i cant redo it,audacity freaking blows.
Last edited by cray159 at Feb 25, 2007,
#6
I'd give it a 9/10, as the backing is spot on but the vocals sound a bit strainy. Imrpove that and you'll have a great song. You though sound like Grohl a bit though
#7
I actually liked the vocals. You could have done a bit better on the loud parts, but as you said, you're a guitarist not a singer. Recording quality wasn't the best, but I can understand, as I use the exact same 'equipment' as you. Built-in mic through Audacity. Couldn't find many mistakes with the guitar, and I loved the tone at some parts. Timing was good. Also, good taste in music STP and Vanilla Ice? Overall, very good. 9/10
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Last edited by Stagger Lee at Feb 27, 2007,
#9
this sounds awesome. Verses sounds great, just gotta work on the I in the prechorus and the chorus a bit, with a little bit of practice you could pull that off without the strain. nice job!!!
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#10
I like it, a lot. Nicely done. On a side note, Cray, I noticed your avatar (Eve 6 is my favorite band, maybe after the Sugi Tap) did you use to hang out aroung the Eve6MediHQ boards? Your user name looks familiar.
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#11
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I like it, a lot. Nicely done. On a side note, Cray, I noticed your avatar (Eve 6 is my favorite band, maybe after the Sugi Tap) did you use to hang out aroung the Eve6MediHQ boards? Your user name looks familiar.



yeah actually i did. I was disapointed to hear that Sugi tap wasnt releasing an EP

but i love the BOLD song.

Ill be critiquing your song guys here in a bit.
#12
I thought it sounded ok the vocals were pretty good for the verses but strainin at the chorus but all in all if you had a better recorder you would have more options to frirt with ,,,you should try sonar cakewalk they are great for production , here i want you to crit my cover of iron maiden -ironmaiden any thought s on how to improve would be great , i play all the intruments guitars and bass plus vocals ,,,,drums are done via midi i am using sonar i would love tohear what you think . i posted it on myspace http://www.myspace.com/theterrorxproject ...... keep jammin you sounded pretty damn good !!!