BC_Joshlz
Outworld!
Join date: Jan 2007
935 IQ
#1
hey guys, ive worked on this song for a bit. I really like it. Please let me know what ive done right and wrong. Thanks guys. C4C as always.
Attachments:
Metal.zip
My Rig:
Guitars:
BC Rich Mockingbird Evil Edge SE w/ EMG 81/85
Custom Strat
Ashton Acoustic Electric
Amps
Peavey Studio Pro 112
Laney Hardcore mXd 30
Pedals
Digitech Grunge Distortion

Pyromaniac of the AUSTRALIA FTW! Club.
trainwreck666
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
66 IQ
#2
Hey man its kl some bits dont quite fit or drag but the riff starting at bar 45 is really kl you could possibly add a harmony their to make it sound more melodic.
Paradox321
UG's Batman.
Join date: Mar 2006
155 IQ
#3
It doesn't sound bad, I think the intro could be a little more interesting though. The riffs afterwards sound good. At bar 45, it sounds like it slips out of key at times, I think you might want to fix that. Cool song thuogh, the outro sounds really eerie. C4C, right here. Thanks.