hey guys, ive worked on this song for a bit. I really like it. Please let me know what ive done right and wrong. Thanks guys. C4C as always.
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Hey man its kl some bits dont quite fit or drag but the riff starting at bar 45 is really kl you could possibly add a harmony their to make it sound more melodic.
It doesn't sound bad, I think the intro could be a little more interesting though. The riffs afterwards sound good. At bar 45, it sounds like it slips out of key at times, I think you might want to fix that. Cool song thuogh, the outro sounds really eerie. C4C, right here. Thanks.