This is a cool song. The riff is very cool. It reminds me of mastodon except with more pinch harmonics. I like the dive bomb, too. It would be cool with mastodon-like vocals. I like the part that slows down. It kind of reminds me of slipknot. You're really good at pinch harmonics. Good job. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
Thats a very rad tune. I really love squeels... i swear they are the best thing to happen since sliced bread. Good job on the tune, its nice and tight. My only real crit would be the drum tones, they are a little rough around the edges. Tighten that up and it could add a real nice professional sound to it.

If you could check out my tune, that would rock... i also enjoy squeeling... and breakdowns are my thing.