Stolenidentity1
UGsRetarded baby on crack
Join date: Jan 2006
724 IQ
#1
This is my bands first song, the guitarist just called me the other day and i put it on guitar pro then made the bass (im the bass player)

I liked it but i wanted some comments on it

the last two bars are just something i slapped in there
Attachments:
band song.zip
Quote by unfathomable_bo
Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
Last edited by Stolenidentity1 at Feb 25, 2007,
RPotts
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
494 IQ
#3
It seems like there's a melody confusion. Is the bass playing lead, because it crosses above the melody of the guitar several times, a big no no in classical music, but then again this isn't classical, we get to do whatever we want to. It seems kinda boring, especially the guitar, the rhythm is repetitive. First all quarter notes then all eight notes. Mix it up a little.
Yeah Dimebag is not the "Greatest Guitarist" of all time... Hendrix maybe... I must go get food to eat with my mouth

$250 for an amp? wow. is it worth it to invest that much in the amp?

Stolenidentity1
UGsRetarded baby on crack
Join date: Jan 2006
724 IQ
#4
^lol you just a bass hater jk, this is just the intro to the song it will chang up anyway

Thanks anyway
Quote by unfathomable_bo
Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun