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Haha, something really cheesy that i made up in like 10 min, I'm sure there are a million others like this that were posted, but i felt I had to do my own ..hope you enjoy

"I love you cadence"

All I have to do
is cross the bridge
to play with you..
You're always there when I need someone
Sing me a song, with lovely harmony

I love everything about you
You neck so smooth down to your g-string so tight
and when you wind down
the double D's, oh how they sing it right

You tend to fall, thats ok,
its only a minor thing...
I'll pick you back up, and move you up to the top.
your heartbeat so strong
I can just close my eyes and nod
slip into a trance, dance, prance, secret romance

You were my fifth, and you were flattend...
dimished, but yet forever in my heart
not sure if ill ever see you again
but i will always hear you in the wind
I love you, Cadence
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String
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Quote by HellBent1337
Haha, something really cheesy that i made up in like 10 min, I'm sure there are a million others like this that were posted, but i felt I had to do my own ..hope you enjoy

"I love you cadence"

All I have to do
is cross the bridge
to play with you..
You're always there when I need someone
Sing me a song, with lovely harmony


I love everything about you
You neck so smooth down to your g-string so tight this line's a bit forced
and when you wind down
the double D's, oh how they sing it right

You tend to fall, thats ok,
its only a minor thing...
I'll pick you back up, and move you up to the top.
i liked it
your heartbeat so strong
I can just close my eyes and nod
slip into a trance, dance, prance, secret romance too forced

You were my fifth, and you were flattend...
dimished, but yet forever in my heart
liked it
not sure if ill ever see you again
but i will always hear you in the wind
I love you, Cadence



overall not that cheesy some of the lines really have potential and are good . feel free to crit mine if u can
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