This was a great song. The vocals are great and the melody is great. I think a better bass line might help, but I do really like this song. The rhythm guitar is also pretty cool. The lyrics are pretty good and original, too. I enjoyed it a lot, though, so good job. I liked the lead guitar part, too. This reminds me of some good ole rock and roll like the kind I haven't heard in a long time. I like the part where everything drops out after the chorus. Good job. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091