#1
everyday i feel so alone
and everynight I feel right at home
everyday i feel so alone
and everynight I feel right at home
at home

All of the lies
Have turned my heart to stone
and now im opening my eyes
to a sunrise from forgotten past lives
#2
Quote by ry-animal
everyday i feel so alone
and everynight I feel right at home
everyday i feel so alone
and everynight I feel right at home
at home

i like these lines, obviously it might come off repetitive but im assuming this is how its sung a couple times over. its nothing that hasn't been said before but you still make it work

All of the lies
Have turned my heart to stone
and now im opening my eyes
to a sunrise from forgotten past lives

the first 2 lines are pretty cliche and i think if you changed those this would be a pretty solid piece because the last two lines are ace


basically i liked this all except for the 1st 2 lines in the 2nd stanza, nice work
7/10

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=531524
if you have time here is mine, its a pretty short piece
#3
yeah I was just trying to sing as I made this up, I like the last two lines the best for sure, I was trying to talk about the after life and how all of this life will affect us even after death and in particular the idea of reincarnation, saying like hey I remember I used to be a pirate in the 1800's is a funny thing.