#2
This is extremely good mate! Well done

I'm pretty much into heavy metal, and I have never heard the original of this song, but this really is very good.

The playing is consistent, and I don't know what you used to record the guitar, but it was a very good sound, as was the voice.

Also, even though there were no drums, (or anything else apart from voice and guitar for that matter), the song had a great sense of rythmn. And a very nice solo bit too.

The only problems (which are only very minor by the way), were that it was very quiet. Also, the voice was somtimes a little difficult to make out over the guitar (the dynamics of the vice had a very wide range, perhaps a compressor (or something to that effect) can even it out a bit?, but then I'm definitely no expert!)

On the whole, very good.


Please crit my music (I've actualy got three on here, posted recently, but u only hav to do one if u want) Just go back and there's 'Judas Priest - Electric Eye', 'Judas Priest - One shot at glory' or 'Metallica - Fade to Black solo' I posted them today, so they're fairly high up the list
#3
^Lol, I just recorded it with the default mic on my G3 iMac. Thanks for the advice on equalizing. I'm sorry but I couldn't crit any of yours, because the music player wouldn't work on my comp.
-Taidgh
If you're going to be crazy, you have to get paid for it or else you're going to be locked up.
-Hunter S. Thompson
#4
sounded real good i really like your vocals the guitar could have had a bit more depth in the tone but over all it was sweet ,,,,,,, crit for a crit N.I.B. I recorded all the songs on sonar and played all the guitars and bass and vocals but the drums were done via midi http://www.myspace.com/theterrorxproject

thanxs and keep up the good work !!!!
#5
this sounds great. very cool song, i'm really enjoying the vibe. not familiar with this band but i will be checking more out from them. any recommendations btw? it was very very quiet though, i had my crappy speakers turned up just before the feedback point and it was still hard to hear. the guitar sounds good though, when i record my stuff with strumming it sounds kinda tinny half the time. nothing much more to say really it was done well albeit really quiet.
#6
nice vocals man. playing was technically good. Ive never heard the song before, but i might go check it out now. I like the effect on the voice.

good job man.
#7
^Thanks. I couldn't really make it much louder, because I'm using my built-in mic on my comp. So if I turn the input up a bit more, I get tons of feedback. I am going to get a proper mic someday... I couldn't really recomend any Echo and the Bunnymen, because I only know a couple of their songs myself. I think they brought out a greatest hits recently though. That would probably be a good place to start. Thanks for the crits!
-Taidgh

STAGEDIT: To somewhat-here.
If you're going to be crazy, you have to get paid for it or else you're going to be locked up.
-Hunter S. Thompson