#1
Ok, re-eq'ed a couple things, added some extra overdub kinda stuff, and added a bridge type thing, just want to know what you guys think of the updates, or just the song in general if you haven't heard the original

C4C again

http://hellbent.dmusic.com/ -- "Think of a Time"

Thanks!
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#3
the rhythm guitar sounds a little midi, but the lead is interesting. the strings are bold i find, but dont have enough low end (i think thats the right terminology, what i mean is there isn't enough bass, it doesnt sound powerful). bass and drums sound good, but thats a drum machine right? you should write some lyrics for this, then itd be great.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=534279