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Just wrote this about 10 min ago out on the porch staring at grass. It involved a lot of inspirations that were running through my mind at the time such as politics/life/people who inspire you/whatever and it all came together as this. I've already made plans for the lower case letters to be part of a sort of slow extended intro into a drastically upbeat verse to start the song off. I personally like it so if you guys can leave some honest original feedback other than "that was good" then it would be greatly appreciated. I still need to add in lyrics for the rest of the verse and chorus but I'm just trying to see where it is going at this point. And if you don't like it then you can say that as well, just speak up please. If you have anything you want me to read I'll check it out too. Well here it is:

it's hidden beneath the sand
lost sedentary values
holdin up as well as they can, as they could
doing what they were told, what they were told to do
it couldn't pass as an everlasting wonderland
someone had to stand up and make a stand
to muster anything they could refuse

it's called good news if there's no news at all
my people made it that way
those people had to make a fall
one for free and one for all

so be it that man
the one who would bring good news
loadin up to disband, whether bad or good
movin away on its own, so on its own it moved
it wouldn't ask upon a super-vasting slumber span
someone had to stand up and make a stand
someone had to stand up and make a move

someone had to stand up and make a move......

2 PIECES ON A RAINCHECK
ALWAYS MEANIN IT, NEVER DISRESPECT
WHATEVER'S BRINGIN IT TO BE THE ONLY METRONOME
WHO'S EVER SINGIN IT IS HE WHO GETS TO SET THE TONE
I WANNA BE ALONE
SO CAN I BE ALONE