#1
Taking time to think it all through
Wasting time, nothing you could do
Beginning to look at my escape routes
Thinking of this time you knew

There’s more words that you been saying
All the things you been saying to all your friends
So many thing’s needing replacing
Now I need to replace this empty spot on my bed

[Chorus::]
You could take my music
You can break my soul
It feel’s like everything
I’ve been told before
You could take my records
Everything you own
I knew one day I would have to hold
Your stupid anger and the open door

All the promises
That you been making
With every step you been taking
All the songs I’ve been making
With all the brutal shit
That you always saying
Every single word make’s me go insane
You can see my anger, you can see my pain
When I sing it from my paper
And we go again

[Chorus]

I know you can find your place
Drown your self in that little hole
Go back with that f****r that make you whole
I knew one day, it would come back
His little love and his sorry ass
I know you’d mess me up
And mess my soul
Go and f**k him and leave him home
Come back to me, just so you could be told

[Chorus]
#3
Quote by *Thundernation*
Taking time to think it all through maybe think this through
Wasting time, nothing you could do
Beginning to look at my escape routes
Thinking of this time you knew


last line is not that good try i think all this time you knew
adds to flow a bit
There’s more words that you been saying
All the things you been saying to all your friends

So many thing’s needing replacing correct it
Now I need to replace this empty spot on my bed

this verse is a bit weird i think am getting what u wanted to say but.its weird

[Chorus::]
You could take my music
You can break my soul
It feel’s like everything
I’ve been told before
You could take my records
Everything you own
I knew one day I would have to hold
Your stupid anger and the open door

chorus is good

All the promises
That you been making
With every step you been taking
All the songs I’ve been making
With all the brutal shit
That you always saying
Every single word make’s me go insane
You can see my anger, you can see my pain
When I sing it from my paper
And we go again

not that impactful can be much better not as good as v1

[Chorus]

I know you can find your place
Drown your self in that little hole
Go back with that f****r that make you whole who makes you whole
I knew one day, it would come back
His little love and his sorry ass
I know you’d mess me up
And mess my soul
Go and f**k him and leave him home
Come back to me, just so you could be told

[Chorus]


well its very personal to you think. but not that gr8 srry

crit the piecei the link if you are free

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=534650

i also wrotea song on doors .its in my sig check it , dont feel obligated to crit that 1 also
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