#1
So I repost it now.. guys I'm so sorry for the first thread wasn't online at the time you were telling me to delete the whole mess.. anyway! here it is again! what you think about it? also mention that i imgaine the music to be a slow, repeating guitar.. though i haven't made tht stuff yet :P


I know a place
I love to go
In your arms
I feel so close
Close to your love
That’s what I feel
Warm and wonderful
Is what world is like their
In your heart
I hope I’ve got a room
A space where I can rest
Put my mind together
I love you
The shadows are behind me
They won’t hurt me no more
I lay down to rest in your arms
The place that I love best
For weeks you’ve been my angel
My little sweet love
And nothing is going to change that
Not yet at least
What tomorrow bring me?
What yesterday left?
The sad things
I wish
Will be buried
And forgiven
The stuff I said that hurt you
What person am I?
Why did I say so?
Why did I make you cry?
You told me the truth
I laughed in your face
I feel so bad now
I’m such a disgrace
Sorry for the rhyme
It wasn’t mine
I just hope you understand now
I’m sorry for what I said
I will hurt you again
We both know that
I just hope you will forgive me
And think of what I meant
Because sometimes I say things
with my mouth
Which my mind doesn’t mean
I know it sounds fake
But this is for real
What feelings I know
It’s for love sake
For you
for me, that's what I want to see
For things I’ve messed
I hope you understand now
That word can bring you down
Harder than lead
Both are painful
But the first one is from me
From my bad side
From that I wish to go away
From that I don’t want to be like
I love you more than you ever will know
Because even if it break
You’re still in my mind
And we both will find our way
We go hand in hand
Love
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#2
I could really need some backup and thoughts about it!
There are two types of music, good music and bad music.

Don't let anyone tell YOU what good music is. Make up your own mind
#3
nice to see that you have learned how to post a song. i will crit it later in the night.
Hi
#4
Quote by abhishek21
nice to see that you have learned how to post a song. i will crit it later in the night.



thats good news ^^
There are two types of music, good music and bad music.

Don't let anyone tell YOU what good music is. Make up your own mind