#1
this is the first time ive done this, so please leave me some comments,
this song is not written as a poen more like fresh strait out of my head lyrics, right there, improvising, so thats why they might seem random.


going, moving, losing this feeling
home's not what it used to be.
all this frustration, need a station.
itl never be for me.

chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow,
let it go and let it flow.

going, moving, losing this feeling.
your all that matters to me.
all this frustration, need a station.
cant you just let things be.

chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow,
let it go and let it flow.

going, moving, losing this feeling.
why cant anyone see.
all this frustration, need a station.
why cant anyone see,
why cant anyone see,
tell me, tell me,
why cant anyone see.

chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow,
let it go and let it flow.
#2
Quote by sionifs
this is the first time ive done this, so please leave me some comments,
this song is not written as a poen more like fresh strait out of my head lyrics, right there, improvising, so thats why they might seem random.


going, moving, losing this feeling
home's not what it used to be.
all this frustration, need a station. try all my frustrations needs a station
itl never be for me.
if its it'll never be for me
change it
chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow, may be pain's a drug....
let it go and let it flow.

maybe let it go and watch it flow

going, moving, losing this feeling. avoid repetition write some another
your all that matters to me.
all this frustration, need a station.
cant you just let things be.


well ok had some repeated lines with alteration but ok
chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow,
let it go and let it flow.

read above

going, moving, losing this feeling.
why cant anyone see.
all this frustration, need a station.
why cant anyone see,
why cant anyone see,
tell me, tell me,
why cant anyone see.

for a bridge its good

chorus:
now's the time for anger,
nows the time to let things go,
pain is a drug that you cant grow,
let it go and let it flow.


being your first time it's nice. with time you'll get better. bit of a cliche but ok

need help on this though
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=534650
#3
I think I can get on the flow of the rhythm on this one... you've got a nice style of putting lyrics together with repetitions here and there...

"all this frustration, need a station"

don't know why, but I'm not feeling this phrase. I suggest a change but if it ruins your rhythm then it's fine, I guess.