archaeon
...And Time Begins
Join date: Feb 2006
320 IQ
#1
Check it out bros

Leave a message here or PM me if youd be interested in a free demo once we record

EDIT: Updated verison at post #7
Attachments:
Mortal Jest 2.zip
Last edited by archaeon at Mar 3, 2007,
ouchies
UG's OG
Join date: Jan 2006
1,613 IQ
#2
That was awesome, when the riffs got slower it got hella boring though, in the middle of it
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#3
Instead, I think that the middle is really cool, and that it will fit well with the lyrics
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#4
It's not great, but it's not bad either... . Again the riffs sound very similar to your other songs (you really overdo the whole 'start-stop riffing' thing). The slow part indeed got boring, but with vocals on top it would probably work. It really misses a solo too. I loved methodical annihilation, that song was amazing, but the other ones you've posted here all sound the same.
I'm sorry to be so negative man...
Burning_Angel
Valar Morghulis
Join date: Jun 2006
2,379 IQ
#5
...I sorta found that boring... and not very tolerable. I dunno, something made me dislike it. Maybe it was the blast beats got hella boring, and very annoying.... Sorry, I just didnt enjoy it.
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archaeon
...And Time Begins
Join date: Feb 2006
320 IQ
#6
Quote by saddam
It's not great, but it's not bad either... . Again the riffs sound very similar to your other songs (you really overdo the whole 'start-stop riffing' thing). The slow part indeed got boring, but with vocals on top it would probably work. It really misses a solo too. I loved methodical annihilation, that song was amazing, but the other ones you've posted here all sound the same.
I'm sorry to be so negative man...


it's alright dude as long as its constructive haha. I'll be making some edits to this one soon, don't take the drums seriously i wrote them up really quick.
siddyjain
Mr Coffee
Join date: Mar 2006
629 IQ
#8
with such noisy drums you'd better reduce the volume of the drums coz they're getting quite overpowering.
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