Registered User
Join date: Sep 2005
290 IQ
Im quite new in the songwriting part of the world, but here is the first song ive made, so some crits would be nice

Im planning to make some lyrics, but i need to know if the song is good.
Captian Xero
The one, the only.
Join date: Apr 2006
343 IQ

The intro would be nicer if the notes rang out. but prttey good in all
I Liked the choice of bass notes.
the Solo guitar should have been distorted
the parts like 41-47 should have had drums
I didnt like the transition out of the solo

Other than that it was alright. For a first song, your doing better than some people i've seen on here. You should tighten up a few of those loose ends, and youll be fine
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2005
290 IQ
awsome work!! too bad i couldn't see that myself ;D

If just some more people wanted to crit it...
The Black Mage
Join date: Oct 2006
997 IQ
Good work. There could been more riffs and more variations. I liked the solos, you are pretty good doing them I sugget for adding more instruments in this song ex. synth in the intro.
Wanna crit mine? link in the sig.

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