#1
[Verses]
when life has lost its bitter taste
the sun shines bright but still i waste
im losing sleep, analize it all
i watch the ground yet trip and fall

i will not lose this lucid state
safe from fear and safe from hate
this will be my needed rest
ill take my time and catch my breath

stumbling in the dark
even though it is day
mind of black
face of grey

from far away my life was great
come look in close and see my hate
the air smells sweet so breath in deep
it will be you last before you sleep

[Chorus]
eventhough at times all seemed so bleak
too cold to love, to scared to sleep
i will not be tied down by this
the sun shines bright on your face?

My Gear:

Ibanez RGT42FX
Fender Strat Copy
Ashton Quarter Size Classical
Roland Cube 15
Behringer Multi-FX Pedal
FAB Metal Pedal
Two Hands
#2
I liked it .. my favourite part was " stumbling in the dark, even though it is day, mind of black, face of grey"

that was .. awesome.. I mean why didn't i think of that? :P overall it was a nice song with some nice rhymes
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#3
thanks man
My Gear:

Ibanez RGT42FX
Fender Strat Copy
Ashton Quarter Size Classical
Roland Cube 15
Behringer Multi-FX Pedal
FAB Metal Pedal
Two Hands