#1
ON THE EDGE OF FOREVER

life in paradise
like a raft on a glass sea
for granted

it seems now to me
like every yesterday
was wasted
like every tree ever planted
only to die
in world that never changes

i didn't think
things would all just go on being
but as i look behind
i was hanging off the edge
the whole time
petrified

all to bring me
to this empty table
no longer wondering why
because thats where they all went
all those forgotten, useless years
one after another
doomed to repeat
like something hell sent
just from someplace closer
the same place where all those dreams went
right next to that phone number
on top the cluttered dresser
with the dust covered alarm clock
in my cage/my room
lost in so many ways
to the world outside
to what could have been

oh god if i could do it again
i wouldn't waste another second


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#2
not bad, but i couldn't really get into it. It seemed to be all over the place, without any kind of real flow to it. I might be wrong though. But with revision, it could be something.
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The daughters of question have been murdered!
Murdered! Murdered!