Overall i think its was pretty good. Advice would be to sing louder and more powerful in the chorus, and hold the notes for longer on 'tea' 'me' etc. Also the distorted guitar was a bit too muddy so you should sort that out. I thought your voice has a good sound though. Which is something i would kill for

Also on the third chord of the chorus try not to do the alternating note thing too much...sorry i didnt know how to describe that well! But hoepfully u know what i mean.

I liked it though.