#1
I know this could be better, but i just learned this solo yesterday and then i wanted to record it. It's not 100% correct.

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#2
its not horrendous but theres definately room for improvement, i suggest u look speficlly at ure bends, theyre a little off in places.
#3
Not bad! It sounded a bit messy though and I think the bends weren't at the right pitch also your tone didn't sound that great.. maybe you should loose some mid and a bit of treble and add some reverb

Practise a few more weeks and then it'll be perfect! And wow.. you really did learn this yesterday? How can you remember what note comes next so quick...
#5
your tempo was a bit off, and some of the bends and such werent at the right time but overall it wasnt awful, with some work and time it will sound good.
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#6
BTW, i think the tone is pretty good if comparing it to other tones heared in UG-forum
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ENGL Thunder 50 E322
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Yamaha HS50M


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#7
Was a bit sloppy and the bends were too flat, you really need to workout for more cleanses. Just play it over and over and you'll nailed it in no time.
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