Here's a piece I just composted in aroudn 20 minutes. No real thought into it, as it's just shred, but it sounds pretty decent. It sounds crap on MIDI though.

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composed? it sounds like you just used a word such as BEAD. and used those 4 notes. it really does not sound thought out or even composed. but then again its a midi
dude, it's fast, but it doesn't sound all that great. you should use some arpeggios or something, just make it sound a little better.

It sounds like crap. I'm pretty sure anyone can compose something like that, its fast but who cares how fast it is if it sounds like crap.