Poll: Green or Blue(ish). Vote for your favorite.
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View poll results: Green or Blue(ish). Vote for your favorite.
Green: Business as Usual
5 71%
Blue: Wasting Days
2 29%
Voters: 7.
#1
Business As Usual


I build my coffins to the nines,
only to be mothered by Miss Iodine.
Driving crippled cable cars for a high,
and sinking lower every time.
I'm finding my vocation reeks of faint endeavors,
a collection of panic buttons and derailed levers.
Conference rooms that beckon murder,
left me slit from ear to ear.
The most heartfelt words you'll never deny:
"I'll take you for your money,
if you take me for a ride"
I'm holding my breath to suffocate you inside.
While we play Chutes and Ladders up and down my spine.
You can't
hurt me
this way.



Wasting days

Well, today I decided that
I would take a snowball
and toss it into the current,
if only to watch it melt.

...and I realized.
This is my idea of love,
a snowball floating in a stream.


As I stepped up to the guard rail,
looked down, and picked a handful of snow.
Intent to force a diamond, but
it came out, as my heart.

Yet, I still threw it, though somehow,
the snowball got stuck in the sky
to hang a brilliant white,
a radiant sliver of a wasted life.

[If the sun is a melon,
the moon is a...?]
Quote by Cal UK
Alk hit the nail on the head there.
#4
Green had some great ideas, and some really gd lines, but blue had an eloquent simplicity I like atm. But still went Green.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#6
Fine no one else vote...

I got to go with green. It's so much better than mine...
Quote by Cal UK
Alk hit the nail on the head there.
#8
both are nifty, green is a little farther out while blue is a little more down to earth..

this one was real tough for me, but blue spelled it out a little too much. That "this is my idea of love" part should be implied not stated.

with that said, green got my vote.
#9
Quote by bassbeat77
i've always liked that piece of yours Alk.


Ha thanks.

Yours is by far the better piece, though.
Quote by Cal UK
Alk hit the nail on the head there.