Paradox321
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Join date: Mar 2006
155 IQ
#1
So, me and the bassist from my band worked on an instrumental for a few hours the other day. It was originally a song with lyrics, but we decided to make it into an instrumental instead. Sorry if certain parts become boring because of this.

I'll crit4crit as always.
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Instrumental.zip
mckenna64
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Join date: Apr 2006
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#4
That was a really good song some of the solo at the beginning sounded a bit dodgy, and some over repeating of riffs. The rest of it was pretty darn cool though.
davidson22
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Join date: Mar 2006
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#5
some parts were a lil to repetative but still very good, id come watch you play it live lol
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hXcHIMfan
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Join date: Sep 2006
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#7
saddam your song is ****in insane dude thats my kind of music!
6_6_6_1_syn
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Join date: Sep 2006
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#9
Yea its a good concept but way too generic and repetative for an instrumental. The beginning solo sounded somewhat sketchy, but it was good.

I think for now 7/10
buckethead_jr
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#10
cool.
I liked the intro solo, but i'd suggest you don't let the overdriven guitars notes ring into each other.
bars 29-60: Great riff but it seemed to drag on for ages, i can see you had lyrics here but i'd try and make this part a bit less repetative.
You're next solo is great.
But then back too the riff...If this is an instrumental i'd make this part a bit more interesting, it seemed pretty generic.
The next solo was great again, i loved you're use of natural hamonics.
The solo starting on bar 129 was excellent. I especially liked 133-134.
The solo does end really suddenly though, thats the only thing i can think wrong.


Crit my instrumental? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8289476#post8289476
ch715dallat
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Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#11
that was awesome very metallica influenced i think? which makes it great the riff were metallica style i mean, the solos not so much, they were great loved the whole thing to be honest would like to hear it live but yeah top noch composition.