#1
this is my new song its about 90% complete at the moment. the orchestra still needs more work and most the guitars are still guide, ill have the finshed song done hopefully within the next week but as its allready sounding good i thought id upload it now to hopefully get some critical feedback , most of the orchestration was played on ibanez rg going through a roland gr33 guitar synth then midi out to ewql orchestra, drums were dfhs cnv programed via piano roll note by note in cubase, heres the link, hope u like it heres the link http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5054857&q=hi
#3
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the link works fine this end, maybe you have a popup blocker on thats stopping the player from loading?, is anyone else having trouble playing it?
#4
Got it.

Opening guitar sounds pretty horrible, like it's vibrating off all the frets at once. Gets a bit better once the strings and leccy come in though. Get's a bit repetitive quickly, maybe some vocals could help it?
#7
i find nothing wrong with the intro, it almost has an iron maiden feel to it. nice epic sound when all the instruments come in. wow, this is very cool and much different than anything else ive heard on this site. i can see this being in some adventure-type video game. the whole things really suspenseful-dramatic sounding, i found myself still listening 5 minutes later. nice work, keep it up. mind giving me a listen?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=534929
#8
Very well put together. Definitely let us know when you have the final version ready because I am looking forward to it.

I like those super progressive quick interludes all the way through it!!
And all the orchestration actually sounds very good, actually surprisingly (to me) very professional.

And I don't think its repetitive, the entire track follows the same motif but swims through it very well, the way pink floyd instrumentals do.

Nice ending too, you could say it leaves you hanging, but it a good way!

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=535143 if you find some time, crit mine perhaps .

And definitely let us know when u have the polished version up!!
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Check it out
#9
review while listening ...
cool opening. Bam! Great start when the distortion guitars kick in!
To me, I would say that it was influenced by bands such as Blind Guardian, Symphony-X, Iron Maiden (Seventh Son of a Seventh Son)

Simply ... it ROCKED!
I also saved it to my Sound Click Iron Dragon Radio Station


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#10
That sounded pretty well put together without being completed all the way. I like the way how you kept the listeners attention going by changing it up. Like another post said it was very suspenseful and felt like a journey. I'm not usually a progressive rock type of guy but I didn't really get bored from this. You just need some vocals now. The intro and ending are also good the way the way are now. Should be great when it's all done with. Here's mine if you wouldn't mind checkin it out: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=537016
#11
This sounds pretty awesome to me. Actually it's really awesome. I do agree with the first guy, the intro is a little bit buzzy, if you want to call it that, but I disagree with him on the point of repetitiveness. To me, it sounded like it was changing up quite a bit. This is really awesome. I love all of it, and really can't criticize this, since I am nowhere near to this level of music-making. But if you will take my honest opinion, it rocked. Great job. :cheers

Could you critique mine please? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522123