#1
This is a very rough cut of a song I'm writing. I have bad equipment and you can tell. So you need to listen to the music, not the quality. This song is not done, the solo especially needs work. But, like I said, this is a rough cut. But tell me what you think so far. I am also working on a metal song, if I ever get a solo to it I'll put it on later tonight.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OEXqUZbNHqg

PS. I suck at writing lyrics so if you think of some and wanna let me have them I'll take them.