#2
i really, really, like your lyrics, especially the verses. very well written and really listenable. it was a pretty fun and catchy chord progression through most of the song, especially around 3:10 in. the lead didnt really do much for me though, i didnt think it matched the song that well. keep it up though, nice work.
mind giving me a listen?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=534929&page=1&pp=20