#1
Ok, just wrote this in about 10mins, unsure about the title. It's a funky-ish acoustic riff that I wrote the lyrics for. Lemme know what you think.


You were my everything
You were the sunlight in my eyes
The velvet in my lies
Oh

You were my only action,
My only satisfaction, oh

So can you handle it?
All the pain he makes you feel
And does he kiss you?
Oh just to make it real
But he doesn’t fit you
Quite like I do

And now you’re gone
You packed your stuff and said so long
Made me know that I don’t belong
With you

You were my only action,
My only satisfaction, oh

So can you handle it?
All the pain he makes you feel
And does he kiss you?
Oh just to make it real
But nobody fits you
Quite like I do

You were my everything
You were the sunlight in my eyes
The velvet in my lies
Oh
#3
see for the title, how about he doesnt like you (like i do) instead?
#4
i kinda like it especially the chorus.
And DON'T change the title
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Last edited by White Pony at Mar 3, 2007,
#5
Hey thanks guys. I've decided to keep the title as it is. I'm also thinking of adding the line 'My heart wrenched in disguise' to the end, just to finish it off.