#1
this is a bit of a lighthearted song, but serious at the same time.
when just reading the rhythm might feel a little off in some spots but with the music it fits perfectly.
the music that accompanies it i could describe as a mix between zeppelin(you should find two zeppelin references in the song also) and steve miller band... basically most of what i write has a classic rock/blues feel.

have at it.


verse1:
got no money, torn up shoes
just scrapin by, just cant make due
cant make her happy, those hopes flew
thinkin about today, an how to get through

bridge:
I, dont, know

verse2:
each day passing, slippin to grey,
better off people, makin their way
uptown, where they stay, Lord I pray
a steady lovin woman, gon' come my way

chorus:
oh yeah, oh no
mans own mind is his greatest foe
oh yeah, oh no
just look around, an you'll know

Verse3:
Sittin around, still waitin for you,
got no drive, so what can I do
get off my ass, babe thats what ill do
get off my ass, bring it on home to you

chorus:
oh yeah, oh no
gotta make it happen, just go
oh yeah, oh no
ya never try, then how will you know

bridge:
now, I, know..

-solo-

chorus:
oh yeah, oh no
gotta make it happen, just go
oh yeah, oh no
ya never try, then how will you know

outro:
Love, you, so.
#2
"bring it on home to you"

sounds like something by s-club 7

just messing. overall it sounds good
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