not too bad of a first song. it kinda reminded me of like weezer or a 60s/70s soft love rock stuff. the vocal quality is horrible but i could understand some of it. the vocals seemed pretty decent and just fair in parts. my favorite part was the little bridge right around 2 minutes i liked how the guitar and vocals came together i heard it repeated in the song too so i was glad to hear that. the song sounds good its just not among the best ive heard. thats a good start tho for a first song. good job. heres mine whenever you get a chance: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=537016