just changed some vocals. i feel like the vocals are a bit to "boxy" . Im not sure if that makes sense to anyone else.
pretty good, vocals seemd kinda... repetitive towards the end, probably not the word i was looking for, maybe monotone? i dont know, but hopefully you get what i mean. guitars could have used a little more treble on the distortion too, i think. however, it was is still a great song. im terrible at writing lyrics, and the ones you had were actually pretty good, so props on that. overall, a good song, keep up the good work. if you could crit mine, it doesnt have vocals or anything, but im trying to see if there is anything i need to change about the music first, http://www.myspace.com/successfulfailure. thanks