heyo, just seeing if anyone could take a look at a new song that my band has, its on our myspace page, http://www.myspace.com/successfulfailure. if i shouldnt be posting this here, sorry, just redirect me to where its supposed to go. thanks, any crits/suggestions would be appreciated and ill do the same for you
Not too bad... keep up teh good work
I like your Christ; I do not like your Christians. Your Christians are so unlike your Christ.
-Mohandas Gandhi
This sounded pretty good to me. The beginning up until about 2:40 really appealed to me, but the chords that you threw in didn't do too much to please my tastes. However, I do like this a lot, and with some good vocals and lyrics it would be a very well-formed and complete song.

Mind critting mine please? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522123
yeah, the part there is supposed to be me doing a bass solo\high bass part, but i didnt have it finished in time, when i record that, ill put it up, will get to critting yours soon