#1
One of the best overall songs Ive ever composed, both music and lyric wise. Its kind of long, but I really love what it has to say, and hope that you do too.

Tears were made right after blood


|Intro|
As we walk through the valley,
Of the careless with breath,
we shall tear down our dignity,
and lay it to rest.
Leaders do not lead,
they lie and decive,
Thats probably why it was made in this order,
so the blood could be shed first,
before the tears bring disorder.


|Verse|
I feel my lifespan growing shorter and shorter,
but is it because of time,
I often wonder.
If there is a god then he stopped listening,
a long time ago before the tears could glisten,
and,
I dont know about you people,
But theres a long way to go,
and bones grow feeble.
Cry out,
No one can hear you,
compassion abondoned us right before trust.

|Pre chorous|
In the mending of time,
and creating of all,
the creator created a perfect flaw,
a solid flowing substance of war,
that is part of us and all we adore,
except for sticks and stones,
and,
Hypocritical rules,
Its a whole new type of elaborate ruse.

|Chorous|
Tears were made right after blood.
And I dont think we'd change that if we could.
We've all lost sight and we've buried ourself,
in a long lost prision once known as hell,
We found it in a box where the demons plunder,
that suggested that scilence be made after thunder,
and I dont think we'd re-arange that if we could.

|Verse|
Now what im telling you might seem strange,
but the worlds not happy,
and i'm deranged.
Its not easy to accept,
alone in your room,
staring at the ceiling,
far to soon.
I was just a kid when I figured it out,
that this world I live in,
is in a drout,
of truth and pride and liberty,
even thou we call this the land of the free.
We're free to pay taxes for oil to everlast us,
but theres more to life than fancy sunglasses,
its a little thing I like to call love,
that dwells deep inside of us.

|Pre chorous|
In the mending of time,
and creating of all,
the creator created a perfect flaw,
a solid flowing substance of war,
that is part of us and all we adore,
except for sticks and stones,
and,
Hypocritical rules,
Its a whole new type of elaborate ruse.

|Chorous|
Tears were made right after blood.
And I dont think we'd change that if we could.
We've all lost sight and we've buried ourself,
in a long lost prision once known as hell,
We found it in a box where the demons plunder,
that suggested that scilence be made after thunder,
and I dont think we'd re-arange that if we could.

|Bridge|
Youd have to live a long time to out live god,
and I was willing to wait about as long as I could,
until I realized I need to go on goin.
I figured it out, why blood was made first,
because when you see tears your upset the worst,
and the day I die there better be blood,
next to a glistening river,
smiling at all above.

|Outro|
And as we walk through the valley,
Of the careless with breath,
we shall tear down our dignity,
and lay it to rest.
Leaders do not lead,
they lie and decive,
Thats probably why it was made in this order,
so the blood could be shed first,
before the tears bring disorder.
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
Last edited by IwannaBeSadated at Mar 4, 2007,
#2
Thats amazing.
Originally Posted by acousticpyro23
Bitch get off my nuts.



Originally Posted by Vigilantius
I asked my mom for a cell phone once, and she said I don't have any friends anyways.
#5
Im kind of depressed on the bridge....I feel like it sucks compared to the rest of the song.
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
I'm Just a Box in a Cage
#6
I agree with the person who said they liked the intro. It was my favorite part.
Overall solid work. 8.5/10