#2
pretty good man
i think the drum beat should be a little faster
I don't like as i lay dying
#3
ya i can tell thats tool influenced but u def have ur own style its all yours so thats good. it def sounds good man u just need some good vocals on it and a nice bridge i think and this would be a fantastic song. i like the main riff so far tho but that only goes so far. just work on adding a solid vocal track for a week or so and this will really come to life. great work so far and i really dont even like metal stuff but i was feeling to guitar in this. mind checking out mine, its more of a softer more melodic rock instead of metal though: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=537016 thanks and good luck
#4
the only reason i came in this thread was because it said 'tool influenced', seeing how they are my favorite band and all

and i agree, it does sound like its influenced by tool..a lot.
the main guitar riff is cool, i like it.
add some vocals to it, as previously stated, it should really bring it up as a song.

crit mine please?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=538644
if consequences dictate my course of action

i should play god and shoot you myself
#6
Hey...appreciate the feedback. This one i threw together in about 15 minutes just sitting behind my pedal and computer. I plan on perfecting the song and adding vocals also.

Thanks
#7
hmm... its kinda nice, well played and all, would be nice if a leadguitar would come in sometime and just shredding totally hehe... and vocals too of course..!
thx for the crit!
Textures - greatest band ever
#8
It sounds just like a pedal demo tape which is a good thing, cuz its very pro quality, although fake drums, and great tone, i like it. I alos appreciate how you play well, and strive for a good recording, low noise, good mix, I would like to see some solos, as I didnt hear any. Crit mine if you please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=536640
#9
The riffage is certainly cool. Some of the runs of notes are awesome. It's definitely not bad for a start. Let me know when you finish the song and I'll most surely listen to it again. Simple drums, but still effective. Maybe shouldn't have let it go so long without any kind of lead or vox to spice it up. Anyway, good shit man.

Anyway, here's a link to my songs.

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=535845
#10
Yeah. The riff is really good. I would just finish it up - add some vox, etc. Sounds like you know what you're going to do with it, but I think it sounds really good. Your tone is really good. What pedal did you use and what recording program? I think it could be a really cool song and would sound great with vocals (like the ones on Schism by Tool). Good job and very Tool-like (the band of course). Keep it up. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091