#1
well, on the weekend
..I smoked some...stuff ..that was probably laced. lets just say I was tripping out mad. i didn't know where I was. But I could only think about this girl and it was weird. anyways. I wrote this song the next day.



with my head on a swivel
you'll know im lost

when im flying past the chapel
you'll know im lost

ill fly
and fall
and drown in the unknown

soundwaves going into my head
thoughts going on unsaid
i wish I could think of something else
but the only thought in my mind
is you.

blacking out on the sidewalks
you'll know im lost

endless shaking and a feeling of dread
you'll know im lost

ill float
ill spin
and ill cave in

soundwaves going into my head
thoughts going on unsaid
I wish I could think of something else
but the only thought in my mind
is you

I'm Detatched.
#2
Quote by TheDistrict
well, on the weekend
..I smoked some...stuff ..that was probably laced. lets just say I was tripping out mad. i didn't know where I was. But I could only think about this girl and it was weird. anyways. I wrote this song the next day.



with my head on a swivel
you'll know im lost

when im flying past the chapel
you'll know im lost
i like the swivel part alot, rhyming with chapel sounds bit forced but still good
ill fly
and fall
and drown in the unknown

soundwaves going into my head
thoughts going on unsaid
i wish I could think of something else
but the only thought in my mind
is you.
this stanza sounds good, but flow at end is a bit rough because of no rhyming
blacking out on the sidewalks
you'll know im lost

endless shaking and a feeling of dread
you'll know im lost

ill float
ill spin
and ill cave in
i like this little part it just sounds right
soundwaves going into my head
thoughts going on unsaid
I wish I could think of something else
but the only thought in my mind
is you

I'm Detatched.


i'm diggin this quite a bit