#1
I cant begin to end.
Myself. Why I try

Ending up in the world again
anything truthful
is a lie

lie in yourself
and your own.
hole

I sink deeper into my self
everything begins to fade

I cant begin to end.
Myself. Why I try

I cant begin to end.
Myself. Why I try

Deep Down inside
something hides
preachers found
faith in
no one

I cant begin to end.
Myself. Why I try
#2
I think you should go outside, smell fresh air, be happy, and then write a new song.

Constructive criticism:

Don't make it sound like every single emo or metal song on the air. Dark is way overdone. And your rhythm is sloppy, the lines are choppy and don't flow.
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#3
Read the FAQ, (the announcment) at the top of this forum please, to find out why this was closed.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.