Into the distance I stare,
At a once known love,
A forgotten truth,
Exposed again.

Love is blind,
And deaf and mute,
I couldn't see,
Her and him.

Her and him,
Him and her,
Neither good for me,
A lovely tradgedy.

For what was found,
Is now again lost,
Love in the sand,
Twas in the palm of my hand,
Tis now in the palm of his.
We should?


You need to firstly read the FAQ (found with the announcement at the top of this forum)

then you can critique a few other users stuff, link them to this, they will then be glad to comment. You don't demand it!
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.