#2
I really liked this. Your voice is funny

In terms of improvement, I'd use effects more shallowly - your guitar seems to be overly swamped in chorus.

Your intonation is slightly out in places, but it's not too shabby compared to most people.

I like the guitar work when the distortion kicks in.

All in all, it's a nice guitar showcase, it'd be better with a backing track. It's hard to rate guitar playing without something underneath to bring the harmonising out. I thought it was a little bit monotonous in places, but a backing track would pull it together I reckon.

8/10.

Please could you crit me back? much obliged