#1
I'm not demanding you critique this.
The last mod somehow got the impression I was. In no way am I suggesting you have to. >_>

Into the distance I stare,
At a once known love,
A forgotten truth,
Exposed again.

Love is blind,
And deaf and mute,
I couldn't see,
Her and him.

Her and him,
Him and her,
Neither good for me,
A lovely tradgedy.

For what was found,
Is now again lost,
Love in the sand,
Twas in the palm of my hand,
Tis now in the palm of his.
#3
haha you make me laugh, you didn't read the FAQ did you, or listen to my last comment at all...?
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#4
err no bumping, the third stanza sucked in my opinion. the first two weren't bad... the last one was decent I didn't lie kagian lost though. i felt it shoud lhave read lost again, as it naturally would.
Can you see in the dark? Can you see the look on your face?