I'm not demanding you critique this.
The last mod somehow got the impression I was. In no way am I suggesting you have to. >_>

Into the distance I stare,
At a once known love,
A forgotten truth,
Exposed again.

Love is blind,
And deaf and mute,
I couldn't see,
Her and him.

Her and him,
Him and her,
Neither good for me,
A lovely tradgedy.

For what was found,
Is now again lost,
Love in the sand,
Twas in the palm of my hand,
Tis now in the palm of his.
haha you make me laugh, you didn't read the FAQ did you, or listen to my last comment at all...?
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
err no bumping, the third stanza sucked in my opinion. the first two weren't bad... the last one was decent I didn't lie kagian lost though. i felt it shoud lhave read lost again, as it naturally would.
Can you see in the dark? Can you see the look on your face?