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Hello guys!
This is a song I've worked on yesterday and tonight and below is the result so far. I think I've hit a wall now, I can't come up with something that would improve the song (ofcourse there are alot of things that could). So that's why I want some opinions on it, I guess that maybe the verses kinda suck and needs to be like totally replaced with something good If that's the case, then maybe you can give me some ideas? Don't be afraid to flame me and REALLY say what you think, if something is really bad I wanna know it!

(After the 2nd chorus there will probably be a bridge or some kind of interlude followed by some chorus, but the important thing is to get the part before that right)


It's too late

Verse 1
It's been a long time now, since we broke up and I know
You're trying to make me jealous, why can't you just understand
You're now nothing more than, a memory buried in the past
You're now just the light, that went out a long time ago

Pre-Chorus
There's nothing I want from you
Nothing you can offer anymore
There's nothing you can do
I have already closed the door

Chorus
And now, it's too late!
There's nothing you can do
Oh no, it's too late!
There's nothing I want from you

Verse 2
It wasn't me who wanted to quit, and continue on our own
I guess time has made me grow, grow away from you
Cause I don't care about what you do, or who you take home tonight
And I don't care about what you say, about the guy you claim to love

Pre-Chorus
There's nothing I want from you
Nothing you can offer anymore
There's nothing you can do
I have already closed the door

Chorus
And now it's too late!
There's nothing you can do
Oh no, it's too late!
There's nothing I want from you


I deeply appreciate opinions and will ofcourse post my opinions on your songs! (If my opinions are worth anything to you^^)
Thanks!